Great, but not perfect

I found playing Fragmented vortex to be very fun! But there were a few thing that made me not give it a 5/5. One, was that you start all over when you die just once! It would be fine if you gave the player lives, of health at least, but because you simply start the whole game over when your hit once, i only got to level 7 and could not recive the full enjoyment of the game. Another thing is there is no story mode. I mean, lets be realistic. I don't think a game without a story mode will even get runner up, there was graden gnome carnage, but thats it! Thats the only story-less game to place good in a competition. I think you should add something like, "a virus is trying to destroy the internet and you must defeat it" or something". And thats it! If you implemented a few more things in your game, i think you have a pretty good chance of doing decent in the competition.

But one last thing, what does this have to do with discovery anyway?