Review of Toast

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DoDo1234

Toast Review
By DoDo1234 on 16 June 2011


Pros: Fun gameplay, original enemys, quite good story, some good graphics. Love the cups, by the way. And the fire hydrants.

Cons: enemys quite repetitive, music overly... same-y. Enemys very easy to kill and the floor of the levels looks weird.

I like toast in the mornings.

Graphics; The graphics was quite good. I like the way that the characters and enemys are drawn, although i didn't like the way the floor looks. Give it a sort of black border or something, to make it look less weird. Also, make something happen in the background, please! Its looking quite plain, and putting something there will make it look nicer.
Last thing, make toast's arms move. He looks like some sort of robot the way he currently walks.

Sound; I like the music and all, but the songs get slightly repetitive... Maybe make level music slightly more lively?

Gameplay; Quite a fun game so far. Love the enemy ideas, and they are very original. And funny. However, the levels get very repetitive, as do the enemys. Make more types, fill the world with them! And make the world seem more lively! Use tiles and decoration more often so its less empty!

Story; Quite interesting story there. I like it. Only thing i might ask is that you make the player be able to control the text.

Interface; Collisions are quite accurate, and the way that the enemys respond to attacks is quite amusing. But please make the enemys slightly harder! don't like The roll attack thing really, because you just roll through all the enemys too effortlessly! Make the character bounce off enemys or something, too make it less easy.

Overall, its an okay game so far. Youve done a good job with the engine, clearly, but there are some problems, i find, with music and some graphics. And difficulty being too low. Also, it was slightly plain in the way the levels looked and were planned out. Please make them more lively.
It's basically suffering the same problems that my game faced, but make the levels nicer and it could become a nice game. Easy to fix that up, right?
Im giving a 4/5 so far,but i haven't yet entered it because I know you can improve it. Nice job, keep it up!

  1. RKProductions

    RKProductions said 11 months ago

    Thanks for the review! I'll definitely try my best to fix everything you didn't like about it. I'm not that good at music, so I could only make the tracks about 1 minute long. I'll try and add an extra 30 seconds to them if I can. There's lots of different enemy types on worlds 2-4, you can't just roll over them, you have to do certain things to defeat them, if that's what you mean. :P

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