Has potential

Please understand before reading on that this review is not ment to put down the creator or his game, however, it is ment to give constructive criticism and to inform the creator how to better his game. Please do not take this personally or offensively. Thank you.


This game, if developed further, can be a 6/6. It is very simple, you get money randomly according to the amount of houses and villagers you have then you buy guards and more villagers as well as houses and some wierd structure. There is no goal that desteroyer2 has given you to achieve, its more like just click on objects untill you get super bored.

Things this game lacks/needs improvements:

1. Tooltips- These are, if you do not know, are windows that appear by your cursor or some random spot in the game screen when you mouse over a certain object. Some people prefer not to press F1 to look at a poorly written help manual.
2. More enemies- variety, variety, variety.
3. Spelling and Grammar- There are many misspells and grammar mistakes in the help manual. If you want to make a game, please pretend you are a professional but not just someone with a computer and acess to the internet. Also do not write instructions and other information as if you are texting. i.e, "how r u doin". You can type out everything you need in Microsoft Word and hit spell check then copy it over.
4. Health Bars(if necessary)- I would want to know when my villagers and guards are about to die as well as buildings.

Even though people are complaining about graphics I understand that not everyone in this community is a graphic designer and that most of the sprites are created on paint or in the GM sprite creator, therefore, I am not going to criticize the graphics.